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PostSubject: A selection of my recent work   Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:24 pm

It's mostly stuff that might be in the game. It's not my best (I must be losing my touch :{ ), but I'll add my better work later. Give me some comments on my work!

  • KSSU Style

    Mini Kirby (Just some resized Kirby sprites. Cheap but effective. I also resized a couple more frames than needed to make it better.)


    Master Green WIP (Major editing job. I'm actually liking how this is turning out. Guess where I got the colours from! BTW, I got the eyes from Rocky.)


    Twister (The one on the left is mine, the other is for comparing. Still working on the other frames. I don't know why the pixels look irregular, but I can't do much about it. Besides that, it looks good.)


    Mint Leaf (This item was from Kirby's Dreamland and would improve Kirby's aerial and allow him to spit out infinite air puffs. In Japan it was called a Sweet Potato and the air puffs were really gas-induced burps, but when it was localized it was a Mint Leaf that gave you fresh breath. I just revamped it, but I might redo it as a Sweet Potato.)




  • Other Art

    My Avatar, Zak. (He's new, so don't give him harsh criticism. BTW, he's way cuter than Sonic!)




That's all for now. Tell me what you think!

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:25 am

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  • KSSU Style

    Mini Kirby (Just some resized Kirby sprites. Cheap but effective. I also resized a couple more frames than needed to make it better.)
    Nice idea, might look better if thy outline was completely black.

    Master Green WIP (Major editing job. I'm actually liking how this is turning out. Guess where I got the colours from! BTW, I got the eyes from Rocky.)
    Geussing ye got the colors form Burnin' Leo?
    Looks great, anyways. The line on the left that makes the round bump on the bottom saucer thing could use some work though.


    Twister (The one on the left is mine, the other is for comparing. Still working on the other frames. I don't know why the pixels look irregular, but I can't do much about it. Besides that, it looks good.)

Looks good. Is the one on the right from Squeak Squad? Eager to see moar. :3

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:40 am

Cool. Twister looks best.

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:41 pm

Master Green could use some more shading on the green section. I agree with what [:] said about mini Kirby. The outline should be completely black, and it needs some more editing so that it doesn't look like a resized Kirby sprite.

Twister is excellent.

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:03 pm

Mini Kirby didn't have a full outline, though.

Master green does need shading. And shining. And waxing, with um… turtle wax.

Thanks! I'm glad you guys like how my Twister turned out. I think the one on the left is from KatAM.

Edit: Adding mint leaf.

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Tue Aug 03, 2010 5:41 pm

Aaaaah... so fresh and minty. Nice work.

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:07 pm

I dun leik mint. The actualy mints, anyways.

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:15 pm

I might change it to it's Japanese name because of another item that it appeared alongside, originaly named Spicy Food in America, later became known (in a later game) by it's name in Japan: Super Spicy Curry.

Edit: I've just added my latest work, Zak the Kirbysmith!

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Sat Aug 14, 2010 10:51 am

lawl you are right he looks better than Sawnic Sonic.

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PostSubject: Re: A selection of my recent work   Sat Aug 14, 2010 11:13 am

I think he looks cuter too, which kind of reminds me of myself because my mom thinks I look cute even though I don't think so.

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